Comments on: Eyes http://www.beyondeternal.com/poetry/eyes/ Looking forward to a future with boundless possibilities! Wed, 08 Feb 2012 00:16:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: fruityoaty.com http://www.beyondeternal.com/poetry/eyes/#comment-3462 fruityoaty.com Thu, 04 Oct 2007 00:18:02 +0000 http://www.beyondeternal.com/poetry/mirror/#comment-3462 I agree with Talamasca... just with a bit of tweaking, it could be a song... maybe a pop ballad. :D I agree with Talamasca... just with a bit of tweaking, it could be a song... maybe a pop ballad. :D

]]> By: Talamasca http://www.beyondeternal.com/poetry/eyes/#comment-3461 Talamasca Sun, 30 Sep 2007 11:21:57 +0000 http://www.beyondeternal.com/poetry/mirror/#comment-3461 Whose eyes are those? THE EYES OF GOD? WTFWTF! :eek: Srsly, this poem could pass for a song. Like pop or pop-rock, maybe? You just have to brush up on your grammar and whatnots. :smile: Whose eyes are those? THE EYES OF GOD? WTFWTF! :eek:

Srsly, this poem could pass for a song. Like pop or pop-rock, maybe? You just have to brush up on your grammar and whatnots. :smile:

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